Still pondering the farce
I'm completely stuck on this one, mostly because I can't figure out who's trying to tell this story. From the stammering and blushing going on from that corner of my brain, I'd think it was Avi. But it has to be Dani in order for the whole thing to play out -- he can't know what Avi knows, he has to misunderstand all sorts of things that Avi wouldn't misunderstand.
I'm likely to have about 2-3 hours of uninterrupted writing time tomorrow night (provided I don't let myself get distracted), so maybe I'll make some headway in figuring this one out. It's one of those stories that I feel has to be written before I can get any further with these two, but it's fighting me in ways these stories don't usually fight me.
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embenshaul) wrote,
contemplative
