Kof or Kofer? (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} embenshaul) wrote,@ 2007-10-14 21:58:00 |
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Struggling with a Character
I've got a story part I know has to be written. I can *see* it in my head, almost completely. But I can't write it.
Why?
Because Avi won't take off his pants.
I mean, I know he does eventually. The boys get married, after all, in Carnival (my not-a-NaNoWriMo not-a-novel that got Jossed by the Massachusetts SJC), and there's at least one story part that already exists from which it's clear that Dani and Avi are sleeping together. But -- and here's where my frustration comes in -- I can't get Avi out of his pants.
(and, yes, this is what I was thinking about at one point yesterday while sitting in shul. Bad frummie. No cookie.)
I've got a story part I know has to be written. I can *see* it in my head, almost completely. But I can't write it.
Why?
Because Avi won't take off his pants.
I mean, I know he does eventually. The boys get married, after all, in Carnival (my not-a-NaNoWriMo not-a-novel that got Jossed by the Massachusetts SJC), and there's at least one story part that already exists from which it's clear that Dani and Avi are sleeping together. But -- and here's where my frustration comes in -- I can't get Avi out of his pants.
(and, yes, this is what I was thinking about at one point yesterday while sitting in shul. Bad frummie. No cookie.)
